Pros
1. POCHE: Much more neater and precise in comparison to Project 1. Poches hopefully focus on the depth of the building, allowing visual communication to be successful.
2. PHOTOS OF MODEL: Although the model being slightly to the awkward scale, the photos make the model visually pleasing.
3. NARRATIVE SENTENCE: The narrative sentence, goes from the painting to the sentence to the typology to the design, making my design much more successful. It also communicates all of the relationships that were previously stated.
Cons
1. MODEL: Looks a bit unusual. For the next project, start the model earlier to be more precise and neat.
2. PRESENTATION: To make the presentation neater, use photoshop to allow each sheet to look consistent
3. PERSPECTIVES: There are no perspectives, to get a better understanding of the idea, there is a need to show perspectives to allow the viewer to feel that he/she is in the building.
4. BLOG: Hardly much text, need to show progression during every week
1. POCHE: Much more neater and precise in comparison to Project 1. Poches hopefully focus on the depth of the building, allowing visual communication to be successful.
2. PHOTOS OF MODEL: Although the model being slightly to the awkward scale, the photos make the model visually pleasing.
3. NARRATIVE SENTENCE: The narrative sentence, goes from the painting to the sentence to the typology to the design, making my design much more successful. It also communicates all of the relationships that were previously stated.
Cons
1. MODEL: Looks a bit unusual. For the next project, start the model earlier to be more precise and neat.
2. PRESENTATION: To make the presentation neater, use photoshop to allow each sheet to look consistent
3. PERSPECTIVES: There are no perspectives, to get a better understanding of the idea, there is a need to show perspectives to allow the viewer to feel that he/she is in the building.
4. BLOG: Hardly much text, need to show progression during every week
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